Not bad at all.
The graphics coulda been better, but they were alright; the animation was nice and smooth. The little action included was ok; as for the music...not much can be said, but again: it was ok.
I give this flash 5 in the portal and 5 in this review. It deserves to pass.
Well...
The animation that was there didn't look too bad in my opinion, but it's just that there isn't very much of it. It's short and seems unfinished. I liked the atmosphere though, very sad. Just make it into a movie that has a proper start and ending.
VERY impressive for a first flash
Most of the time when people submit their "first flash", it's usually a piece of crap not worth our time. Your's however, is different. The animation was extremely well done for someone's first time, and your Linkin Park music choice wasn't too bad either (you should really edit this and credit them). However, you need to finish this animation, not just leave it hanging. That was the only thing I was disappointed by.
needs some length
looks really good for your first flash. i like the black and greys. put a story line and about five more minutes to it and it would be cherry.
Confused
I cant read minds, so i dont know where you were going with this. The graphics and style werent exactly top notch, although the sound was crystal clear. the random death in the middle got you a 6, as well as tickling my inner evil a little. 5+ish overall