Good start
This is a good start, because you are good at drawing.
However, you need to add more movement and animation... and the sounds need a better microphone.
Plus, it needs to be longer, actually have a plot, and since it looks like you were trying to be funny with the foreshadowing "joke," you need to get better humor.
not bad for a first!
I haven't sent in mine yet but i'm still workin on it. Yours is pretty good. The sounds were ok, the graphics where most in need of work but the originality was iminent.
Nice try...
Like you said, it's your first flash. Nice try. The sound wasn't very good. I did like how one of the villians was named James. I always thought that was an excellent butler name. It made me chuckle. Try to do some music next time.
nice
it aint bad for your first try can wait until i see more of your work.
Cool Style
I like the style, and it was pretty good for someone who used a tutorial. Keep trying.