Very original, very interesting.
It is good to look at a submition that isn't founded on ass gass and/or some song.
The story itself is interesting but as this doesn't take as long as, let's say, Bitey you could have made the mans face better and the talking it self too. It was very stylish but the sound is pretty bad especially on my speakers.
All in al it is a good one, improve the sound and make the graphics a bit more elaborate and I'll give you another W00t all my 5 R belong to this :)