very good...
i was impressed for this being one of your first flash because it was reasonably well done...although one of the car scenes u messed up and made it small thinking there were parts we werent goin to be able to see...but u show a lot of good potential...keep it up...
touching
ok this was kinda touching man gd work, fast loader to it took me next to no time and it started playing.
A five for humor.
Because it made me laugh when the kid sank to the bottom. That looked wonderful.
This gets better every time you submit it...
The first time i couldn't understand it but you've added bits and pieces to ammend that.
I think it's very important that you redraw all the scenes before the part where we see those two guys in the car, especially the opening scene, the hand with the needle needs so much improvement.
I don't want this to get through yet because i don't want to lose the motivation to improve it further.
But when it's finished fully and tidied up, i know it'll be awesome.
this is remade!srry i saw it one time here!it is
stolen!admit it
wat the hell u on about mate