Amiable for a first attempt.
The only real problem i have with this is the slow pace and, concequently, the boredom that follows. But i gave it a passing mark because there's promise here. Try again and make sure to give the animation more energy.
Amiable for a first attempt.
The only real problem i have with this is the slow pace and, concequently, the boredom that follows. But i gave it a passing mark because there's promise here. Try again and make sure to give the animation more energy.
not bad
not bad you could do better