Better than your previous one.
I'm impressed with the changes to the gross amount
of cussing, how ever you need to get over that fear of homosexuals.
You obviously have talent, why waste it?
Maybe when you mature abit you'll make better flashes.
Good luck, and keep trying!
Just so you know, I have nothing against gay people ; I happen to have a gay friend which I hang out alot with on weekends. Since the crew is mostly guys, I had to go with gay jokes for the most part. As for the white mage thing, the reason I did this is because most people think the White mage is a female, when HE actually is a guy. Since the plot is started I'll be able to have a much more diverse humor in part 2. Thanks for the constructive review.
Dude U R Teh L33t!
Funny man dont get down on yourself so much it was pretty funny a bit much on the gay humor stuff {not one to hate on anyone} but still funny like when that dude in booty city got his shlong bit off hehe
Thanks :P
not bad...
heh u must play D 2 or sumthin...
you use the same language as the other players (^ _ ^)
Actually I don't, lol.
Lame
First things first. I love sprites, and you totally ruined them in flash.
you stole the Bananaphone driving someone insane plot at the beginning from a different flash piece that's already on the web.
The words hung around for too long and it lead me to a point of hoping it'd end soon.
It could have been done better if you thought of ideas on your own.
-Dunlavy
I didn't center my movie on the banana phone thing, I was just looking for a random way to start the movie. At first, I used Cher with her shitty do you believe song, but then I heard banana phone and thought I'd just use that instead. I do not claim to have gotten that idea ; this is not a blatant rip off. I assumed people would figure out that this is more a "tribute" than a ripoff.
Not too great.
I didn't really like the plot. The graphics that werent sprites were pretty bad. The sprites walking was way off. And the text stayed up for way too long i mean come on. Some of the jokes were ok but a lot were stupid or homophobic.
I'm trying to get better at graphics, but I just didn't feel like putting most of my time on them. As for the text staying up for too long, the time it stays on the screen is the time it should take you to read it out loud. The movie seems to be slower on Newgrounds though, so maybe that's why you thought it stayed for too long, but on my computer it's not any longer than when you would read it out loud.