Too Short
The characters are drawn really well. Awesome work on them.
The biggest problem I had was that I couldn't read any of the text... It went by to fast.
And the rest of the movie was too short. If this one does get blammed (hopefully it won't), you should consider these changes.
Pretty Good.
That was good, but, it needs to be longer, and you need to slow down the titles a bit (not a lot, just a bit), they were moving so fast I could barely read them at all. Other than that, you 've got talent.
It's alright...
I wish I could give you a big kick in the direction that you're going...
P.S. I couldn't read the text. Could you maybe slow it down?
nice its good
nice gy its a little bit choppy aniamtion make it smother next time but otherwise try harder and youll get better