How about SLOOOOOOWW!
Geez man. that was slow. i like the intro music but the rest didnt fit as well. you should make the actions a little FASTER! especially for the first attempt. improve the speed and maybe the music and u got a better score.
How about SLOOOOOOWW!
Geez man. that was slow. i like the intro music but the rest didnt fit as well. you should make the actions a little FASTER! especially for the first attempt. improve the speed and maybe the music and u got a better score.
Moves much too slowly
The choice of music was good, but this moved so slowly.. it was boring. Perhaps if the plot was speeded up, if the plot was added to.. but as it is, it's just not quite there yet.
Moves too slowly.
Graphics: Very nice graphics!
Style: Wayyyy tooo slow. Need to increase the speed of the plot development ofr something like that. Like your plot, pretty original.
Sound: The sound seems to lag behind by a couple of seconds. Could also use some voice acting.
For each attempt did he die or just get hurt? That is very confusing. Anyways, pretty good, just speed up the next episode. There will be another one, right?
Well, this was my first flash submit so I didn't expect to get a showcase or nuttin. Thanks for the criticism, I will try and speed it up some if I make another episode. As for him dying, ya he died but in MMORPG's when you never are permenantly dead.
argh! people!
Good sound quality doesn't mean that a flash should be saved! Other than musical selection, this was a blammable flash! and moved incredibly slow, and wasn't really funny, and looked poor.
Optimize the sound, wanker.
-AnacondaHL
Sorry bout that, optimized the sound!