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Reviews for "Mario Shorts #1"

Good, but way WAY too short.

You did good animation wise, but now you've got to make the movie length much longer. Try making it at least a minute and a half or so. Otherwise, good job.

Short no?

I think I have been abit over kind in some places with the scoring. You need to make it alot longer. By the time it started it was allready a couple of seconds from finishing. It would be good If you keep with the mario fighting idea but add a story line and try to make it atleast 30secs long.

l to the Ater

hmm

intresting but far, far too short it needs to be at least around 30 seconds not around 10.
mixing final fantasy music with mario is a bad idea and they just dont go together.
looking at this animation you have probaly started flash a couple of weeks ago i know animating isnt as easy as it looks but keep trying and you can definatly pull off some decent movies.

alright buddy

ya got talent bud, i give ya that, but ya know what you're missin? -drum roll- length. tada! You were right, good sound and such, im proud of ya. But a bit more COULD and WOULD be quite entertaining. Also the lenght of the music is to be questioned. How long DOES it take someone to read the word "Replay" anyway?

Zelfury responds:

thanks

too short

it was way too short next time add more things for him to kill and something different it was bland

Zelfury responds:

k