lovely :)
Not much to add. My thoughts have already been expressed :)
I think if you were to add vocals it'd be difficult to do since all you have is the wav file (hopefully unmastered) to track on top of. It might be easier to not bother.
In any case, thanks for sharing this with us! :D
Sweet
Sounds dangerous, and really good.. :)
Cool
Pretty good, but the panning seems slightly off-center (slightly leftish). It bugs me a bit.
The reason I love industrial
Love it, love it, love it! It almost represents a refined deviance bundled in barbaric undertones. Very juxtaposed and smooth.
Very Good
I advise you not to put a vocal track on. Reason being this song has a good reputation, and when people try to put vocals in industrial it usually doesn't work out. By no means am I trying to discourage you, there are plenty of good awesome songs with great vocals. It just so happens that there are also a plenty of songs that are disappointing in the aspect that the singing ruins the song. I'm sure that you can figure some way to create and master good lyrics. I'd like to see where you go with this song.