Reviews for DV-Lost In The Tide

[Puggydot]

ur not gonna like this...

the melody is so standard... cant you come up with a more original melody? its 90% arpeggio on the chords... that makes it sound so kiddie.

the bit after 2:30 is better because the instrument is better for arpeggio-like play. you should have made a more intresting melody, and change the bass to a crunchy deep bass line that does more then just follow the first note of the chord. the rithem is so standard too... man work on your originality.

kids music!

DenVessidence responds:

well you rpretty smart oh wait no its 100 percent arpeggio.
the part at 2-30 is the same instrument just faster paced.
rythm is has a y in it not rithm.

the fact that its arpeggio doesn tmake it standard its how you slice the chord. you i listend to your stuff and i dont think you know what a chord is.

thanks for trying to give critisism but this sound slike an anger post because it doesnt make sense