Cool!
It's starts very softly, and gets really ravy. What I can suggest for your future songs is that you compress a bit your instruments, and please pump up that drum kick! Dancing techno music needs a powerful kick, to make people jump off the floor. Try compressing it too and adding some more effects to widen the kick, so that it would sound like a really powerful synth kick. Yeah, I prefer using a true drum kit for my songs, but when i used to do dance musics, i always forgot about that. Try to hear from the best dance producer on ng. You'll see what i mean. Their kicks are always ultra powerful.
I can't think of any other tips now. Check out my tunes!
Peace.