Simple but funny!
I liked it. You didn't go too extreme with the violence and it was well-drawn. Yay for quality!
Reviews for "the Chicken Dance Tragedy"
Ha ha
I thought it was kinda funny. The bat could have used more force to the swing so when you revise it [looks like it may get blammed :( ] make the bat swing with more force. That will give you more of the feeling you are going for. Keep trying!!!