Good for the amount of time you had!
This is great for only 2 days of work. I liked the graphics, and i liked Heinz himself. If you have time try making a small series using him. I think they could be great!
Either way dude, keep up the good work! 4/5
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ROFL on the previous review...
well it was good as a flash animation but I suggest putting more "story" in future projects.
I understand that this was a quickie so it was good indeed
Honestly...
I wasn't GOING to review this when I looked over some of the previous ones...but this shitty piece of crap that "crayonplayboy" calls a review just ticked me off. There's no thought or grammar in it.
So here's an actual review:
Graphics: I have fooled some with flash myself, even though I primarily only review things on NG. This is some of the more clean, smooth animation examples I've seen. The only problem I had was with the loading screen with that messed-up picture of a kid. Other than that, this was good.
Style: ...I don't know, never really knew what this section meant. So I usually just stick a 3-5 of ten in it.
Sound: Great. Good synch, choices of SFX. As some have said, the ending clip from Monty Python and the Holy Grail was a rather odd choice...in fact, it's the only thing that got your score in sound down from the 9 it might have been. End the sound layer differently and it'll improve the flash as a whole.
Violence: not excessive, not even heavy. Well done. I kinda wish the pidgeon would have died, it was annoying me. But oh well.
Interactivity: none.
Humor: well, it was fine up until the whole kiss and blush thing. That really threw me off. But the idea of one thing outrunning something else (Wile E Coyote and Road Runner e.g.) seems to have had its day. And the sound clip at the end was not funny. Rather it was unfunny.
Excellent work, don't get me wrong. But needs a few things before it's on the top of my list.
I don't get it, what's the big deal about the soundclip at the end... it's MONTY PYTHON! Don't you get it!? Ahh, well...
This made me laugh for some reason.
Its nice to see something that dosent involve mindless amounts of blood for once.
And dont listen to the last fag
Haha, funny!!=)
Haha, love the owl, and the music, so funny!!lol , reminds me of the tootsie poip owl..ummmm how many licks ....you know?