I liked how you drew the characters.
As for the rest, I thought the bit when he "dived" back into the forest was
animated well. However, the scenes with him running need some work, and the explosion
FX,etc. As for your comp freezing, I suggest getting a stronger one, or simply
feeding Flash more memory. This submissions score could have been higher,
had you compressed your audio, or used a shorter song. All in all, not bad. :)
<3 <3 <3 <3
I loved it! As they all mentioned, size matters... So does length... But other than that it is great! I love the style you are using...
Keep up the good work, I'm waiting on episode 2!
Too Short!
If each episode is gonna be this long, combine about three together then release it as episode 2, animation was great, the slapstick gun death was funny, keep the fast pace as well, slow animation flash is boring.
OMG silverstein
the movie sucked. well, not really. but it took forever to load, and i was expecting a huge ass movie, and it turned out to just be the song. yeah. you get 20000 cool points for using silverstein. pretty good animation, just calm down, dont rush yourself, and take it a frame at a time. things will work out.
Bad compression.
Storyline is a little dry, and I waited so long for this movie to load. 3k is a little high in size, so try to reduce it if you can.
The movie, however, needed to be SOOOOOOO much longer. The graphics weren't bad.. I guess. But, I fail to see how the Ninja's (or nija, as you called them) had 'rocket bombs', and the guy after them had a pistol! Oh yeah, and what was this mystery you were talking about: "as the mysterey unravals" I didn't understand what you were trying to say. Not bad I guess, but work on the drawings and animation. Also, read the Newgrounds compression tutorial (I'd provide a link but NG won't let me)