I like how you put this together...
I am looking forward to seeing them all. Sould be very interesting. And with the movie coming out and everything...
I like how the dialog was done with the um and stuff....that is how people talk vernacular i believe it's called. makes the movie much more believable. The old treatment for the story was also nicely done.
The eye joke was funny as well
good job...looking forward to seeing the next one!