lovely
The animation was quite well done. I especially liked how you made it look like the wind was blowing on his hair when he was standing over the water, and the lighthouse beam turning around. The style was quite nicely carried out. It was smooth and very realistic. Nice job.
Pretty Good, but just one thing......
I'm pretty sure suicide is a sin within itself and if you commit suicide they won't let you into heaven...... err, that's what the bible says anyway =P
well as far as poetry goes its prety good
I liked it, I understood it which is kind of hard for me to understand poetry but i guess actually having something to look at helps
Incidentally
kudos for the Sister Hazel font!!! well not THEIR font, but they used it before, so whatever
So sad just tears at my heart strings.......
To me this flash is sad and beautiful. The flash really brought the poem to life.The inspirations with the bubbles going woot put a smile on my face.The song could be a bit darker and sadder...maybe make a sadder remix? Well anyway most of the animation was good and this reminds me of things so good job.