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Reviews for "Paper Mario Adventures #1"

Where do i know you from?

I've heard of wingzero somewhere.... was it FFXI? Or was it gamers dotcom... hmmmm

Anyways, i can see the effort and i applaud the work. Some things need improvement though like the bomb scene. Try to slow down Mario bouncing around the screen. And the background dissapearing is disorientating.

The first bit was quite well done though. I was thinking you rushed it at the end

RyoumaNagare responds:

It's from Gundam Wing.

meh

seemed somewhat pointless but cool.

Come back with a better plot

The sound effects and the jokes were a good point in this one, but it really lacks a true story. The crate gag was quite smart :p. The custom cursor was a nice little feature too. Keep up practising !

RyoumaNagare responds:

Yeh...I know. This is a piece of crap. It was FbF. Now, I know tweening and stuff. I'll be back...with better flash.

Ok....

Not the best, but better than some lol so good work keep it up.

You need a better plot.

You have a nice story but not a good plot. You next flash should be better if you attempt it.