this e-mail suck's
I'm going back to homestarrunner .com strongbad's e-mails are much funnier.
Reviews for "Swordsmen Police"
Uhhh....
nice Strongbad rip-off.
Nice rip off of HomeStarRunner...
However the humor was nice. I found it very funny. Mmm, pizza.
:P Anyways, You had a grammar problem. It's not "the swordsmen police SOUNDS like IT would be a great way..." It should be... "the swordsmen police SOUND like THEY would be a great way..." Anyways, good job, keep it up.
ChexTTTBFT responds:
Hi. About the homestarrunner thing, yes, it is the same format, but, it's like, is Conan O'Brien a Jay Leno rip-off, or is it merely in the same format because the format is liked and it fits what he wants to do with the show?
And, about the grammar... 1) Who tries to have perfect grammar all the time? Not DojoSwordsman Bob! 2) "the swordsmen police" is a singular idea, another way of saying the sentence is "the idea of the swordsmen police..." so, if it is a singular thing, which is how he meant it, then he was actually correct, and you would be wrong, but actually you could go either way I think.
i have flagged you
because you stole what strong bad does!
get a life make up your own stuff
No, just didn't do it for me...sorry.
Ah...I don't know, there was just somthing missing...maybe you should make a decend flash movie of your own before you start making parodies of others...ones (might I add) that are actually funny. You need to work on the interactivity in this one too, like in the real strong bad emails.