Pwnage
I think you captured the tone of the song well, and I like how you changed the instrument playing the lead to avoid the song getting too boring.
I think the song could be shorter, though, and that you could cut out a fair bit of repetitive material without losing too much. I would also look into finding a bigger rhythm guitar sound to achieve more of a metal tone.
Overall, though, I like the song!
PGegen
Glad you liked it! Thanks, man!
ownage
thats some freakin numa numa all up in there
Needs more work
I still want more complecity, maybe add some reeverb to the guitar, and try expeimenting more with slayer. But effects onto the quitars, and make the background guitar louder. And maybe slap in some more instruments and more effects to really make the song great. BUT!! I have to say..get the full version of FL Studio...not that the plugins already in it will change, but so that you can download more VSTs and synths, sounds, packs and stuff to improve your songs. Good attempt tho, but just need to make it better. And i dont think this had enough variation for a 4 minute song, try to cut it down to 3:00 - 3:30, or add WAY more instruments and variation. The drums tho.. they are good, but add more drums and percussion to really make it interesting. The #1 thing to add onto this song tho, is complexity. I know its hard because of having the demo, so you have to do it all in one sit so..just get the full xD. Well, im not a professional or anything but thanks for thinking of me as a pro :D 8/10. 5/5 to boost up the score a bit :D
Dude, trust me, you are too a professional. Whether or not your parents bought your full version for you, mine would rather spend money on my education than any musical talents that I may have, which sucks, as the full version would help. Does the echo thing help at all? I thought I sounded good, so I put it in.
A Good start!
You've got a lot of good material here, so kudos. Some of your instruments are clipping. For instance, when you have a lot repeated cymbal hits there is some distorting going on. I'd bring back the cymbals just a bit, and keep an ear open to unwanted distortion. Here's a tip: Try using cymbals to finish up drum fills. It will make the piece flow much better.
I think your main issue is with sound levels of the instruments. Try going in with a critical ear and readjust the volumes. The Kick drum should be a bit deeper and not quite as wide (it's causing some of the distorting). Also, try toying with the idea of adding in a bridge for some variation!
All in all, nice work. Keep working at it!
5/5
If you have aminute I'd love your opinion of my latest piece ST Suspense!
For the record, that wasn't a start, hence the V3, but I'm glad you think it's good (and that you're one of the only people NOT zerobombing me XD!). And I figured that the drums were causing some distorting, but none of the distortion was unwanted. All of it was intentional, including that caused by the drums.
Yeah, seriously, I'm surprised Konami didn't hire you for the Metal Gear Solid soundtracks.
ehh
As i've said in so many songs before, slayer doesn't sound good with out some effects on it making it heavier not whatever you did. The guitar just doesn't sound good.
To tell you the truth, man, you're making it seem like you just hate all metal in general. I ain't saying that it's true, but that's what's implied by the dialogue. I've had two people in my V2 say that the guitar didn't sound good, so I tried making an echo in the guitar, but clearly some people don't think so, such as you, which is why after 2 fives I get zerobombed. Not exactly one of my better reviews, I will defenitely say that much.