Reviews for "The City"

[Willie565]

Whassup Biotch!

What'd you mean you couldn't be bothered, dude you have no life. Where the fuck am I in the creds like where's my prop biotch! yeah the art was great I wasn't expecting it to be quite so good the way you described it,it sounded crappier. French, I agree are you french? you're Dutch but now french? CrAzYaZz! It was pretty good not enough scenes to understand what your were conveying well I know what it is because I know you. The foot scene was too long and screwed up but I'm sure you've heard that millions of times yeah I liked it.GREAT JOB!!!!!!

-West Side Will

Dwarfking responds:

Haha. I was too busy droppin' like it was hot to give you props. I guess the foot scene is kinda screwed up looking, but I meant to have the camera between his legs.. I guess it didn't quite work, hah. No worries though, I'm just so fly that don't even matter. I was just knockin' the boots H-Town style, and that's juz how we do in da ghetto. Thanks homie.

[Calvin-The-Nivlac]

cool.

How.... French....

[nejhleader]

geez man

the arcade fire is pretty much the best band i've heard in a long time

[flashconnoisseur]

surreal slice of life

i like the music and the flash was interesting, enigmatic as it may be.

[P-Funk]

A little short

I don't think you captured the overwhelming feeling of loss very well, the music didn't exactly fit the setting. It seemed very laid back and let's smoke a cigarette with your buddies and live the day by day sausagefest looking forward to nothing. It was quite short, but the point seemed a little off, either in depth and long or directly showing something that has meaning and short. I want to know why someone is standing alone, or why the man walks alone, why the kid is crying, or what happened to the deceased and how much it meant. The animation was good, I liked it. I just need more of a plot or premise to work with. Just my 2 cents.