nice dude
i like the start, it's very original and sounds great. kinda odd how it morphs into something you don't quite expect once most of the music starts. i agree w/ elder, it would make a good credits song.
once you get into the middle, the drums start kicking ass, and the guitar sounds good. it's a little slow to start, but sounds really cool later in the song, something you have to give more of a chance than you might most music. a little on the short side, and it never really develops past the original guitar riff, but sounds great for a first try, keep up the good work.