Nicely drawn!
Great artwork, but what's with the white screens? It makes sense for the clouds, but it seems you're using a "fade to white" instead of a fade to black for inter scene transitions... I think this detracts from the overall quality, which by the way is pretty good, BUT... There is little character movement, it's almost all just "point of view" movement, it's good, but that's all it is. Even very well drawn art can't make up for that. This might be your intended style, but I think it needs more to drive it overall; maybe if you added a central character, or figure, maybe a bird flying & some transitions in point of veiw, or maybe a recurring thing... it's just an idea. I hope to see more from you in the future cuz you've demonstrated some real talent here; I just think it could be better. :)