somewhat interesting...
...it reminded me of the drawings i used to do as a kid. like a big warehouse scene or something with random little men fighting or falling into traps and shit. it looked like this thing was gonna be blammed so i gave it 5R for nostalgic reasons. you made me remember my childhood. now i have to go torture small mammals. i hope you can live with that. have a nice day.
yup
First off it was a lil too predictable, you could tell exactly what was going to happen because of the props around the area. That kinda killed any possible element of suprise in this.
Have you ever heard of continuity editing? This doesnt work as a flash film because its all one shot, which creates bordem, as there is very little motion. The average shot length is about 10-11 seconds at a push, before a shot cuts or dissolves into another shot. As a cheap ass internet flash animation it works though, but with continuity editing, I probably wouldnt have (attempted to if it wernt for the high scores) blamm this. I guess its a point of opinion really, I look at any film, be it flash or film film, and have a look at the way it is edited, as it is supposed to tell a story. For me I just found it boring, and would have probably enjoyed it if you used different focal lengths, and maybe spent alot more time working on it.
Oh yeah and I fucking hate stick figures.
Anyway keep up the good work, and try use more continuity editing like the great flash artists on this site (DIE_COKE, David Firth, etc)
Thats the key to success, good editing, and an eye for cinematic detail even in flash.
ATF
Yes I am stressed out, and vindictive, as I got a U in psychology for my exam... But hey I got all A's In film and photography, so im not fussed
Not bad...
I like the concept. Gave it a 5 so that hopefully this will stay. Hope to see more of your stuff soon.
Was funny..
i liked it, the reason i gave low marks for most things is that sticks just dont require that much talent! If you branched out with full body anim, and kept the same humour, you would be onto a great series!
I liked the 'boo' bit ROFL, a little bit of pee came out 0_o
interesting
im not usually one for stick movies but this concept was good. good job and nice use of lost prophets there!