It was an alright first submission
Well, this cartoon certainly isn't the reason that people go to Newgrounds, but it was fairly ok in some respects. However, I'm a bit suprised on why you choose to rate the movie with an M rating. From what I saw, there was hardly any real bloodshed in the movie. However, from an animation standby, it was "TWEEN-TASTIC"!
With my final remark, I would say keep practicing, and try to use less tweening.
bad
a few suggestions:
make the people REAL people
add more blood
...
thats it
I don't really see this surviving on NG
Sorry dude...
I like the concept but it's just too short.
Better luck next time.
eeeh
The talking was WAY too quiet. You can barely hear what they are saying, even when you turn it up. The talking is also mumbled. The graphics seem kinda choppy in parts also. The major flaw though is the sound.
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good for your first flash but still... you need the body to move more closer to the hands. it makes it look like a bunch of nuts swinging against eatch other :P