I'm not as nice
Ok I'm gonna give you the good first. The idea was pretty kick butt. I like the mindless violence . Even some of the music. Now here's the other half of my critic. First of all I hate it when I read a description that sounds like an excuse, I.E. "Bear with me, I only had two days to do this.", if it's not finished or whatever then don't bother putting it up. A lot of people will be partially turned off already. Don't do that!! Now the animation is orignal enough and well done, but the music is too loud so it sounds kinda scratchy/static and kills the mood of the carnage. Details stairs and maby some tracers for the weapons fire. Other than that I think you've done a pretty fair job. I hope you find this review helpfull and nnot hurtfull. Keep plugging away at it.