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Reviews for "The SpaceShip Battle"

Not too good.

A few tips for you:
Don't do stick fights. Everybody hates them.
The comments field is for you to tell the people about your movie, it's OK to write how long it took to make, but write the content of the movie.
Creating a real piece of art may take weeks or even months.
It's better than most movies I blammed, but not good enough.

stick people....

stick people aside, it looked like you actually put work into your flash. you didn't submit complete filth and for that i respect you. good work.

I'm not as nice

Ok I'm gonna give you the good first. The idea was pretty kick butt. I like the mindless violence . Even some of the music. Now here's the other half of my critic. First of all I hate it when I read a description that sounds like an excuse, I.E. "Bear with me, I only had two days to do this.", if it's not finished or whatever then don't bother putting it up. A lot of people will be partially turned off already. Don't do that!! Now the animation is orignal enough and well done, but the music is too loud so it sounds kinda scratchy/static and kills the mood of the carnage. Details stairs and maby some tracers for the weapons fire. Other than that I think you've done a pretty fair job. I hope you find this review helpfull and nnot hurtfull. Keep plugging away at it.

Another stick-flick

Ok im saving this from a blam becasue its not THAT bad its ok. It had once nice explosion with the gernade. Work harder and it will be better.

Pat

Nice

Well, this was nice. I think it deserves to pass. U shpould pay more attention to details, like...THE STAIRS!!! lol And u should add more music during the fight.