Fuck all the negativity...
it was cool. Sometimes a movie doesn't need crazy things like music or plots or backgrounds to be worthwhile. For a first timer, this is incredible (take a look at the portal for 1/2 an hour if you don't believe me). True, you might want more action next time, and probably length....but I don't care, this is Metal Gear Solid.
Thanx for the comment...
I didn't actually expect too great scor being this my first animation and it being really short...
I'll try to do better next time...
Not Bad.....
Its good for your first submission, you but like dratkcuf said you need to make a storyline or do something with it
Pretty good.
Broken record review.. yeah, yeah.
But anyway: Animation was great and all, but like all the others say, you need a storyline.
Hope your next work gets better.
5
The plot for this is not really that important, or known to be real. Basically, a man is showcasing his skills with weaponary, how he can toss the gun around, swivel it in his hands, etc. The film was pretty short, but you did get a good jist of what was going on. Maybe in a future movie, you could extend the plot to various different things, such as adding a backstory for the character. We see in the final seconds that he is either being asked, or is doing to the asking of questions and someone is shot. That type of thing keeps me intrigued, so a sequel, or extended version would be appreciated. Good luck,
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Weird
That looked somewhat like one of legendary frogs drawings. But I still found this mildly amusing.