SOUND
it's obviously that you appreciate cartooning. i suggest you put on several episodes from your favorite cartoons, and then just listen to the sound. just listen. don't even watch the TV. just turn your back to it, and listen. cartoons aren't all about what you see with your eyes.
Deffinitly alot of potential
i think the animation is practicaly profesional in its style at least, and most of it is drawn very well as well. those are deffinitly the good things and why i gave it an 8.
i think that the sound is horrendous. the voice acting isnt neccesarily bad but your microphones or atleast the voice quality is prety bad. also you dont have very many sound effects what so ever which really takes away from the animation.
the overall story i cant really comment on because i couldnt really stand watching teh whole thing because of how it was put together ( i would but i dont have the patients right now). the layout of the animations, how you put the scenes together could greatly be improved, from what i have seen out of all 3 animations there was alot of shots where not much was happening (pan too much or some thing). any way even though i think this is a huge downfall i gave it an overall 8 because its still a ton better than most stuff on any flash site
this is funny and out there.
This cartoon is funny and out there. I was confused at 1st but then I started laughing. It is very original and cool. I liked it.
Eh.
The animation here is good, but thE VOICES ARE HORRIBLE.
Work on the audio, and you'll have a huge succsess.
MY GOD,its rocks and sucks at the same time..SOUND
WHERE IS THE FUKCING SOUND____??? you good dude but you need the fukcing sound