uh-huh
dialogue was a bit random, long-winded and not especially funny. sounds a little too much like something my younger brother would do. pace was SLOW SLOW GRINDINGLY SLOW and if you're making more episodes of this you absolutely have to speed it up. graphics were ok, homestar runner-style. the voices could have been better, but seeing you're probably not a native English speaker that's forgiveable. you hit the frontpage anyway, congrats. remember what I told you about the pace now will ya
Superb.
I loved the story..I liked the graphics and just the whole style.
The movie is lengthy! I love lengthy movies!!! It had a lot to offer, superb job :-P
(I dont know why you didnt see first page coming)
painful to watch
SO BLACK PEOPLE ARE ALL EVIL? IS THAT WHAT UR SAYING? IS IT?
Nope.
3/5
Decent. Nice, smooth animation and graphics, but that's the best part. The dialogue was shitty and the voice acting was annoying. Alot of scenes dragged on way too long and you could've done something alot more interesting with the storyline. Hopefully future episodes will be a bit more entertaining and funny.
sucked
you need to learn to tell a freaking story as it is right now you have no story telling skills, and as far as ivory crap is concerned you cant come up with good ideas either. the animation was pretty good though so you just need to put it to better use.