Lots of potential, still not there
Dude, your character is a very goofy one, but there was little joke made about him besides some small sight gags. And DUDE the French are RIPE for ridicule, but there was nothing there, not even a song in French for the background. I didn't hear a word of French in the whole film, come to think of it.
I did love the silhouettes, tho! Star Wars music is okay, but some cheezy French guy singing would have been a lot more appropriate. Maybe even one of those English approximations of the words, those can be great as well.
In all, there was a lot of potential--you have a good eye for making a humorous setting with silly characters--but no follow thru. Like someone else said, your graphics are solid (tho the cars are "behind" FAThead when he's walking); you just need to work on the content. Keep it up!