Wow
OK generallyI don't know the music scene, I don't know the slang and the jargon, I'm not going to be much help if I try and offer advice, even though I don't ha ve any. What I've been trying to say is totally awesome work :D.
Reviews for "New York Lights"
Gorgorothx responds:
haha that's all you need to say to make me keep writing. Thank you so much.
well done, my friend.
good beat. :D a bit fast for my personal taste, but im not holding it against ya. XD the only reason im giving this a nine is because there were some parts that overpowered the rest of the song. other than that, good beat, good melody line, all around good. :D 5/5
Gorgorothx responds:
Thank you, kind sir.
Good Rhythm!
I like the fast beats that give it more of a starting climax into the song. I think a slow start is a great way to intro most songs and this song is no exception. I just think it was very well done.
Suggestions: The Ending in my opinion could have been better. Maybe you could have gone up in the same style you came in. Also maybe bring back the build up intro beginning into maybe the middle of the song to give it more depth.
Not much else but 5/5, 9/10
Gorgorothx responds:
Thanks for the nice review! I'll remember that for my later works ;)
Good song
got your pm, be happy to review
I really like your song. It sounds really professional to me. You really do have what it takes to be a techno/trance artist. I liked the variety of instruments and melodies you used in there. It does really paint a picture of new york lights.
Suggestions: I'd say the only thing you would need to work in is your transitions. They could be more smooth and less of a division between two parts. Fades, stops, and purely transitional bars work really well in songs. But transitions are limited to just these three methods. Think of unique ways to make your songs flow more easily. Great job though.
Gorgorothx responds:
Yeah, I know exactly what you're saying. It's especially important in trance type stuff... Thanks for pointing that out!
not bad
Not a bad song, the patterns are well done and the synth selection isnt to bad, the intro seems like a familiar beat though i cant place it. seems almost christmasy to me, then again ive been known to be a bit crazy so its all good. Id say add some more depth to your songs, more bass and some panning effects if your using fl look into the fruity peaker and automation clips. im sure theres the equivalent in other programs i just dont know what they are. But anyways, a half decent track, keep at it this is a pretty good start for this genre.
-Mothman
Gorgorothx responds:
Thanks for the suggestions, dude!