Ok I guess
It was a nice flash and I am sure you spent a lot of time making it but a few good pointers would be 1) choose some more unique colors 2) the line stroke you were using defines a beginners movie, buff up the stroke a bit for a more cartoony look 3) Get something to capture your audience because without even one interesting moment in the movie not many people are going to enjoy watching it.
Keep up the good work!