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Reviews for "Keen at Home (trailer)"

Ok I guess

It was a nice flash and I am sure you spent a lot of time making it but a few good pointers would be 1) choose some more unique colors 2) the line stroke you were using defines a beginners movie, buff up the stroke a bit for a more cartoony look 3) Get something to capture your audience because without even one interesting moment in the movie not many people are going to enjoy watching it.
Keep up the good work!

valiant-infidel responds:

I'm not new to flash and this is my style, but thanks for the pointers anyway.

I'll be sure to reserve tickets to this one.

So that I can burn them all to prevent anyone from being hurt. This is along the same lines as Cat Woman in quality, God help you if you liked Cat Woman.

valiant-infidel responds:

when you see the full movie your mind will change.

Wow...

I remember back in the day... I played all the Commander Keen games... They're great... The computer generated sound gets annoying, but it's still great. But, this isn't all that great, but I can't believe there's someone else out there who plays the game and appreciates it... I think you may have some potential, but please don't submit trailers... They always get blammed... However, I appreciate your appreciation for old games... Better luck on your next submission!

valiant-infidel responds:

don't worry the full version won't disapoint.

Porn

Few people realize that if you want your flashes to make it through the portal..make porn. HARDCORE man. Seriously, sex sells.

valiant-infidel responds:

uhh right...

I'll vote to save it

I do indeed believe your flash will be blammed, simply because everyone's on a bloody streak (including myself) stemming from bad flash within the previous hour. However, your flash isn't that bad. Not the best, I'm sure, but a good start, and it has great potential. Congratulations, you have my vote.