Not bad for your second try.
Not bad at all - the animation is nicely done. The backgrounds could use a little more detail, but that's not a huge problem.
Reviews for "The Amulet (teaser)"
DaN-90 responds:
Yeah...I know the backgrounds need more detail but I think I will get better on that later.
DAMN! that looks sweet.
crap dude, those graphics must have taken you ages to draw... very detailed bed and house...
also, the animation was so damn smooth! i just looked on in amazement when the arm put the amulet down... that looked so realistic.
overall, i dont know much about the plot, but im liking this so far!
7/10
(THE THUMB: UP!!)
DaN-90 responds:
THanks!! Yes it took me a lot of thinking and a lot of TIME making that arm!!
keep at it!
first things first, many flashes look like copies of ideas, styles and such - but you have gone for your own style, you havnt tried to be the best artist in the world but you kept to your own style, i can see you put an amazing amount of effort into animation, if theres anything you should work on is the sound - persoanlly i feel that sound is 90% of a movie, but all in all this is promised because it looks like you care - dont listen to the morons who quote spelling mistakes, ive probably got about 10 in this passage - theyve probably never made a flash in their lives; before people start calling me up on the fact i havnt submitted anything, just because i havnt submitted doesnt mean i havnt made anything ;)
anyway to summarise:
graphics: very good, cause be improved with shadows in the backgrounds if you have the time that is
sound: needs to be improved; try get a sound which has a feel to the action thats happening
style: i can tell this is your style and you put alot of effort into it; so i gave you a high score for that
animation: i cant critise that, you are by far a better animator than me
story: too early to tell; but it looks very promising
i hope to see this series when it comes out, good luck and dont listen to people putting you down!
DaN-90 responds:
Hehe...THANK YOU SO MUCH!! Very good review!! Now I know what to be improved..Very GOOD!!!!
Okay..
It looks interestin.. Good luck man.
DaN-90 responds:
Thanks!
needs work
i liked it despite alot of things so i must say it was ok