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it's kind of sad that people actually need this explained to them, but regardless, some of the longer sentances go off the side of the screen in the newgrounds' windowed format. Also you might want to slow it down a little more, considering that the people you are trying to communicate with are most likely of lower intelligence thus lacking the ability to read quickly. All in all, I think you have something going, but you might want to work it a little bit more, just work on the spelling in a few places and working a little bit on making the background not blend in with the text, as it does on a few occasions. Forgive me if I'm a little harsh, but if you're going to say this, it would be better if you got it perfect. Maybe more would listen.