:~> Well
You know preety well what to do you, but you didn't. Take a look at the stuff you missed:
* File size - too big. Too many images and a long music with high quality (or so it seems). Anyway, it sounds that the flash could be smaller for the content you were presenting.
* Colouring - awful. The combination background/text color mostly made it incredibly hard to read. You know what contrast is? Well, you should stick to the rule black over white: simple content. Or just dark over light.
* Text speed - too fast. I can't play it! ;)
Well... at least you know all it takes to make a good flash. Hope to see something better signed by you in the future.
# Poirot #