I love your style, but...
I absolutely love your style it's very invader zim like i can tell u were going for that. But the voice acting is impossible to understand. either like make them more clear or add subtitles. also i think it would rly make it alot better if u made the mouths match the talking (looks like it's chinease dubbed) lol. but rly u are a very talented artist. keep it up!
One word... ...preloader.
Ok.
Great animation.
Great Art - i mean it's not Dali or anything, but it totally works. I like your character design.
The intro is great, except since you don't have a preloader it just kicked in and then stalled... and i have DSL so there's just no excuse for that. Put a damn preloader on yer flick.
Also the sound stopped syncing up half way through, which killed it for me.
I'd say you need more sound effects, and maybe some background music.
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... and the writing isn't perfect, work on it a little more.
But damn it's got great potential. You've got talent, now go refine it.
static
hm...
iunno...waht was the whole damn thing about, i do like your art and stuff BUT....your sound was horrible, most of the time when you needed it...it was'nt there...iunno i liked it but the no sound totaly ruined it for me....
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I like your drawing style.. it reminds me a lot of VGCats. *shrugs*
Pretty funny. <3
Keen Toons, eh?
Well you really have a hell of alot of talent going for you here. The animation is some of the best I've ever seen in a Flash carton and the opening intro was pretty godd but your feature has some major porblems. First of all, while it wasn't a problem for me a bet the lack of a pre-loader was very annoying to the dial-up users out there. It be nice to have some buttons or somthing to start is when you want. And if you stream yours sound maybe we could pause it as well. Second of all your voices are very hard to understand and are very low quality. What you really need is some background music better voices (or subtitles if you're going to stick with these), and sound effects. The whole recharging sequence was painful because it moved so fast and without and sound effects it was just plain boring. You ned this to be easier to follow and then it will be quite near perfect. So good luck on the next installment.
Regards, Ben Fischl