i really enjoyed it
except there were no background sound effects! it was driving me crazy! there were no sound effects at all really, i dunno why but it was really bothering me, maybe add some quiet music to the background or just some sounds somewhere! anyways other than that i really enjoyed it
I didn't laugh...
Actually I only laughed at the beginning, when the white guy got in trouble for a hate crime. Besides that I didn't find anything funny and had the struggle to hear what the characters were saying most of the time. Graphics were good but the really important things like plot/humor failed.
Bonus Stage anyone?
I'm not sure, but you must've been inspired by the Bonus Stage series, right? I mean, Phil Argus (Bonus Stage co-star) is even in the portrait during the hospital scene. That being said, you have definately let your mentor down... the ONLY funny joke being the one about the black guy which, due to your author's comment, might've been authentic racism... (Not cool!) Anyway, the animation was awesome, the drawings were decent, but the dialogue/plot/humor was so bad that i think you gave me cancer. Fix it =/
creative drawning stlye was neatto
you had a nice drwning stlye, that was really creative, and pretty cool, but it wasnt funny, not to mention either total lack of sound or bad lip-synk, it had a lot of potential
Good, b-u-t....
Well, like many people before me have said..missing sounds. Fix that and you're already doing better. At the end..the music started before he said yup, which was kind of a bother. The sync of the words and mouths were very noticibly off at times.
And now for the good things
I love you art style!!! I can't express that enough. You've got a great way of drawing that I am absolutely drawn to. Heh...Anyway, the voice acting added to the hilaritiy of the script (which I thought the humor was great). With the added sound effects...it should make the jokes that much more effective.
Keep up the good work...Id like to see another of these :)