Very Nice But...
See I don't offen comment on something unless I think I have a really worthwhile comment. Now this film has alot of potential, You have the right style and lots of great ideas, Though this movie (although short) has plotholes already, The beggining I really liked, The Pulp Fiction theme was perfect, Ever since they met with the Boss everything started to go pearshape, Firstly I think your characters shouldnt all use the same models, Secondly you seem to be swapping decades through your story, You Arcitecture Resembles a Modern Age, But Your characters and cars depict 40s/50s, The Hand Grenade at the end was a very crappy ending to a cool short, A 50s cop wouldn't have one, Also the stealthyness of the Mobsters when disposing of the cops was not at all mobster like. You Have alot of Potential, And I encourage you to contact me, I would love to work together and do something with you.
Great Work,
-ShooBocks-