Good start for a beginer.
Dude, it is a very good start for beginers like you. The graphics are very well drawn and smooth. The style of the moive is pretty cool too. However, what I do not like is the black screen that lasted for at least 5 seconds in the middle of the moive. I hope that you can fix this bug and make better moives in the future.
concept was good
you had a good concept with the whole future samuri thing, but them you just had to go and copy DBZ. While I was a fan a DBZ until the huge marketing push made it popular, and like with many popular series like Power Rangers, the series just kept going on and on without end and without making any sense. copying DBZ so heavily was your biggest mistake here. you should have confidence in your own ideas enough to make a movie without having to take the whole vanishing, energy ball, and flying elements out of an already established series. You should try to make a movie about the future samuri as you would like him to be instead of how goku would do it. good graphics, the sound needs improvement especially when there are spaces were there is no sound because that makes it boring. little to no interactivity. not very funny, and overall I didn't think it was carried out as well as i think your concept could have been. keep trying and remember to have confidence in your own ideas.
Good role models
Nice start. So...a Toriyama fan I see. That's a hard thing to do is to use his style. You got people like me out there. The lines need to be cleaned up. I also think next time you should use less anoying music. It may sound good at first to you but it got on my nervs at the begining. You got a story started thats cool. Um... They are aslo good rolemodels because they do their homework. It sends a good message about education........ Just kidden dude. Good for your first video, keep up the good work.
Has potential
The graffix are rigid, but it gets the point across and the sound is sporadic. Throw in some theme music, work on the movement and expressions of the characters, and I think it would rate an overall 7.
All flash, no substance
First off, that movie looked really, really good. A very easy movie to look at. However, looks aren't everything.
You have a huge problem with your fight sequences. They don't really have the look of amazing strength that these fighters are supposed to be exhibiting. I mean, that punching bag at the beginning looked like it wasn't even getting touched. Also the first fight sequence lacked a lot of power with little circles representing powerful blasts. The buildings falling had a nice touch, but it wasn't enough. There's also the problem of sound effects and the lack thereof. The absence of sound could have contributed heavily to my feeling that these guys weren't that powerful.
I think major work needs to be done here before I can consider this good, but at least you've got the hard part down in the graphics.