not bad
it was an interesting 1st episode to this series you got here. i hope that the next one(s) will be good too, and something tells me that it will.
i look forward to seeing future episodes.
Reviews for "guineapigs - episode 1"
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Dialogue needs vast improvements. On a constructive note, when making a flash, always have the voice be the LOUDEST thing on it, i had to turn my speakers up to make out what they were saying, and then got the annoying game sounds... not something one wants when hung over. Also, i would encourage you to construct better characters (in the sense of plot developement and in drawing) flash provides tutorials, use them and hone your skills. One last thing, perhaps it is just me, but toilet humor has never been my cup of tea. Good job on the blood animation though.
...o.o I can tell you had fun...
unfortunately, this isn't very good. the voices are a bit hard to hear and the animation itself is incredibly lacking. I'm guessing you really, really enjoyed making this though so at least the experience wasn't wasted ^.^
wtf
look, i know you put a lot of time into this, so im not going to try to just tear down your entire self esteem. however, this is a majorly flawed animation. i can see you were going for a gross out warner bros style, which means maybe you should actually watch a few cartoons, get a sense of timing. thats what comedy is, timing. at first i thought all the characters were speaking gibberish, which was funny until i realized they were actually speaking english. theres really no excuse for that. i use an $8 microphone going through a shareware program. there really is no reason to have that foul of audio. comedy timing aside, the last few scenes begin to run into each other, the audio beings and ends before characters even begin to move their mouths, its basically chaos.
watch some more cartoons, classics especially and get a feel for timing. read some books like cartooning in flash, or illusion of life from disney. these books really help lay down the groundwork for what a cartoon should be.
visually however, i think you did quite well. a stripped down style with repetitious models can be quite funny. focus more on your comedic timing, your audio recording, and your vocal acting.
what the hell was that!?
the sound sucked ass. i could hardly understand anything that they where talking about. the animation wasnt that great and the story made 0 sence. better luck next time