Nice
Great job to LeviaNeo for the original idea and to you for putting the extra touches + explanation.
I both enjoyed the piece AND learned something out of it (at least I hope so)! DOUBLE THE FUN!
I'll definitely re-listen to this now and then [hoping to learn by repetition how you gave "the atmosphere" ;o) ]
10/10
5/5
downloaded
fav'd
P.S. I LOVED the keyboard-dial (would it be correct to call it a pitch-bend?) thing.
yes lol. the wheel is called a pitch bend wheel. so i guess so :D
in terms of atmosphere. i would define it as an EXTRA presence caused by the merging of instruments. it is the unity of the instruments that creates another sound... like adding another dimension, which you can feel.
it is not something i hear, but i feel it kind of.
I am not preaching high and might opinions of music at you. Just how i percieve atmosphere. and what i would judge it at.
i think to capture such a feel, their must be something mimicking the heart beat... at a subconscious level i mean. your mind can create the illusion of hearing a heart beat. that is what i think i achieved with the (here i go again LOL) PIZZICATO strings lol . I try to make the Strings flow as much as possible. just to keep something always present in the piece at a nice friendly pace. um...i cant really explain it very well. sorry! lol. i think if i really thought about it i could explain it. but not in a response review lol.
i will PM you if i get any ideas.
OH! try making some. posting it. and i will see. Also DO NOT add any drums or synths that whine or have attitude. just use the synths closest to sounding orchestral. it may or may not be more challenging. but if you need help i am always here.
thanks alot for reviewing this work. and i am glad it is worthy of a ten! :D:D:D
you rock :D:D:D thanks.
great
Your work is sooooooooooo good I just love how you put things togeather and its all from the heart
thanks matey! i really appreciate that! allthough most credits go to the original creator of this song. levianeo. he was the original creator. i just remade it via the keyboard and reaper. I hope you will be submitting some audio files! so i can critique rite back atya! :D:D:D
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Live on a keyboard!! man good job, didnt notice any errors, keep em coming
YOu are too kind! and adding me to favourites too! yayness! thanks so much.
i most definately owe it to you to check out some of your works. i will check out your compositions now. and look forward to it.
And i can hear all the errors in this piece LOL.
it is not myne entirely. i have simply adapted this piece to meet my personal taste.
the real credits should go to LeviaNeo though. he is the original creator of this concept.
thanks for this kind review and great score. :D:D:D
Good job
bravo!!!!!!!! That was great. I like how you added the different instuments. They added to the song in a rather nice way.
The ending was a bit short, but nothing bad.
Once again, Bravo. Feel free to keep this up, its a good song. :D
yay lol. i am really pleased you have enjoyed this! lol. i thought you might think it was rubbish! lol. and yes, i did end it rather quickly. but i was only trying to throw a concept at you, just to maybe help you understand structures and subtly a bit better? none the less, i personally prefer your version. its not dull like this one LOL.
thanks again matey! cheers. :D:D:D