ok
it was ok but it wasnt really that funny
Reviews for "Mario at the Beach"
Hehe
Quite funny in it's randomness
ThePixelKing responds:
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Likey
I liked it.
Nothing to special, but funny anyways.
Not bad, but too short
good stuff but not long enough but i am protecting this so I hope it stays
Unimaginative, with poor writing
While I DO like the premise, overall, the writing is downright poor, plus the end doesn't make any sense. This one definitely needs some reworking. Spot on effort, tho!