Its ok.
I like it enough to not Blam it. Keep it up.
Reviews for "return 0f teh grim"
Not bad for a quick joke.
But it really could have used better voice acting. Also the backround characters walking by could have reacted to what was going on, by laughing or by giving grim wierd looks.
Interesting
This movie was accually pretty funny :)
good start
I want to paly. I do. Really, that was nice, despite lame graphics and the fact it's pretty short. Take some time to lengthen the story.
Heehee
Awe, I thought that was going to be really terrible from the title and your author comment, but it surprised me. Pretty short, but it's put together rather well. Seriously though, work on your grammar. @_x;