Not much special, but alright
Graphics: The sprites were good and adding the pictures looked alright. The stuff you´ve drawn yourself were not top quality drawings but they weren´t bad. You could work a bit more on the fight scene however. I suggest adding a few more special effects to make it look better and more agressive.
Sounds/Music: The songs you added are a little bit overused, you hear them everywhere. I wouldn´t mind if you picked some different ones. The sounds were alright, just basic sword and shield sounds and some screams from Link. Nothing wrong with that.
Interactivity: Textboxes were nice, especially that you could press the arrow to continue and don´t have to read fast or anything. What was also a good idea in my opinion was to add two play buttons, so you don´t need a preloader.
Overall 6 out of 10, 3 out of 10. Decent submission in my opinion, but not much special. It could become a good series however if you improved a bit (not sure if you want to make another episode though). I would especially aim on improving the graphics some more.
Anyway, well there´s your review :) I´ve posted this in the Zelda Club, but I´m not sure if you´ve read it so again: If you want more reviews for your flash go ask in the Review Request Club in the Clubs & Crews forum.