Work harder next time
There was quite the need for improvement in this video. There were misspelled words all over the place and the animation just became horrible at some points. The music was okay, but nothing to get excited over.
So, do you care to explain how Mario wasn't deleted? Unless you're making a series, the ending to this movie doesn't make sense (any one of the three).
All in all, this submission falls below average. But don't stop trying to make something BETTER.