All good but..
Well the beginning was amazingly promising, I mean the flowers were really nice, music well picked with a smooth looking backdrop. The problem is that you do too little to keep the audience intrested. I'm sure a lot of effort went in to it and it is a very good job, but people tend to bore of a single non talking mono-chromous character from only one angle. Don't get me wrong, It's beautiful but not quite edged.
A very good work, but you can do much better