Reviews for Lethal Sneezes

[UberBarista]

Decent

Graphics: The graphics in this, were alright, but nothing really special, notable over use of Tweening, brought this score down a little.

Style: Just like the animation, I didn't really see anything, different, or interesting here, good overall though.

Sound: Wow, the sound, even though well thought out, and fitting, was way to low on quality.

Interactivity: At least you put a replay button at the end, not doing so, something that is becoming a trend now, is annoying.

Humor: They were funny skits, but, this animation needs more effort.

Overall: You worked hard on this, that much is noticeable, so I gave you a passing vote, hopefully this won't get blamed. Other artists on this site, somehow get a lot shittier movies through, so I don't think you'll have to worry about that.

faye-smith responds:

It's frame by frame... only 2 tweens in this, the bird and fence!
I worked hard on this, but i'm new to flash =D

Thanks for your review anyway

[Gravey]

Your on the right track.

This was decent because your drawings were good. You have enough artistic talent to make something like this work. Don't get me wrong, the idea was good. I liked the death by sneezes idea. Very funny. Especially the first one. :D And your animation was nicely done as well. Very smooth from beginning to end. The biggest problem was the voice acting. It was really bad. Have a girl do the girl voices instead of doing it yourself. That would help a lot. And get a few friends to do a few of the characters. That way there is some diversity in what we are hearing. The quality of the sound wan't bad. You just need to get some different voices for your different characters. This movie was a little humorous, so that helped out your score a little. Basically decent job on this. Good luck in your future flash movies.

faye-smith responds:

I agree about the voices *embarrassed look*

I'll change it at a later date! =D

[Fire-Man]

ok

quite well drawn an stuff :)

faye-smith responds:

Thanks

[abcd-1234-mike]

Nice

Good job with this movie.

faye-smith responds:

Thanks =D

[LJCoffee]

Not great

Not terrible either though - I guess...

I'm giving you the benefit of doubt here though as I could SWEAR that I've seen something VERY similar to this not to long ago...

Maybe you based your work on something you've seen - I dunno...

Not completely terrible - you did a half-assed job on the animations (which is better than alot of submissions) but it wasn't very funny overall....

faye-smith responds:

Yeah, that submission was mine, but i'd just got flash it was stick people, so i redid it... I didn't do it half-assed thankyou very much! it's mostly FBF