not too bad
pretty good, i liked it, some things you need to work on, but overall it wasnt too bad of a job, keep up the good work, i will be looking forward to the second part
Reviews for "FFFlash ep1 (1/2)"
Keep graphics consistent
This is an OK concept, but it could be shortened a bit. The backgrounds are a good idea until you get to the Venus Tower graphic from Golden Sun. It's so horribly pixellated the point of the characters being there is somewhat lost in the viewer's inability to figure out what they're looking at. The characters are OK, but if you're going to write text, please be consistent (i.e. if it's Chosen One, don't write it Chosen one) and try to keep names and grammar correct.
If I had a nickel for every time....
Normally a flash like this would be passable. BUt this work, form the plot, to teh sprites to the horrible pixellated graphics (well, it's okay in some parts) to the choice of characters, this is almost exactly like the rest of the moldering horde of generic fanfic flashes that invariably get praised by fanboys of the series too blinded to tell that they're being duped.
Shit like this is ruining the art of parody and fan stories, even to teh point where memorable characters like Sephiroth and Cecil are pinful to watch, especially if tehy get caught up in doing the same obvious, perfervid scheit they always do in these getups. Write something original, and maybe when you develop a mind for plot (unlikely) then you can mak a flash that TRULY does the series justice.
TheHolySephiroth responds:
This flash was not really (as you can see) suppose to be too related to any of the ff series, but I borrowed certain things like the "holy materia", and the last scene. But, of course, I used it for a reason, and thats cause I'm combining my two favorite games (ff6&ff7 obviously). Well good day, I hope u learned something from this =]