Keep graphics consistent
This is an OK concept, but it could be shortened a bit. The backgrounds are a good idea until you get to the Venus Tower graphic from Golden Sun. It's so horribly pixellated the point of the characters being there is somewhat lost in the viewer's inability to figure out what they're looking at. The characters are OK, but if you're going to write text, please be consistent (i.e. if it's Chosen One, don't write it Chosen one) and try to keep names and grammar correct.
not too bad
pretty good, i liked it, some things you need to work on, but overall it wasnt too bad of a job, keep up the good work, i will be looking forward to the second part
nice
this is great! cant wait for the next one.
great start for a rookie.
As a flash rookie, you did a wonderful job as your first entry survived. I rated high in reviewing your moive because 90 % of the first flashes are in the graveyard. Back to this moive, if you can make an introduction before showing the moive and make the "black screen" part shorter, you will have an awesome flash. Anyway, very good in your 1st try, I wish you to make better moives in the future.
THANK GOD
iv been w8in all day to c somting good come tro this portal most of its been shit all day thanks for cheering me up hahaha