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YOU USED CHILDREN OF BODOM!!! AUTOMATIC FIVE. Although, the flash really wasn't that great, especially the running scene, I found it hilarious.
Reviews for "Tomb Raider - Iris (ep:2)"
Short but sweeeeeet.
The most glaring point of this movie is that it obviously has had alot of work put into it, namely in the character art. The animation leaves a little to be desired, the running didn't look quite right and some of the tweens weren't perfect, but it worked fairly well.
My other criticism is that there was little explanation to the goings-on of the movie. I've watched the first part, and it makes things a bit clearer, but little details affect the coherency of the movie... Why is she running, for instance? I can understand going from point A to point B, but it looked kind of dramatic. She could have just walked to the other end of the room without too much effort. I think if as much was put into the story as was put into the art, this would be front page quality. I think you could fit more into that sized file (Or even make it a larger file, I wouldn't complain) without compromising the graphic quality and such.
But I'd like to comment again on that I really liked the art. The animation had room for improvement, but the art was fantastic. And it wasn't anime! Bonus points for that! But you really did Lara's character justice with the way she was drawn, the whole thing looked good. My only criticism with the art itself was that the robot seemed to lack the quality that the rest of this movie had. However, the art is by far this movie's strongest point. Pay more attention to the animating, make her movements more fluid, and you will have one hell of a good animation here.
So on a closing note, I hope the story develops well (And quickly, so we don't have to wait too long to find out what's going on :)) and that future chapters of this series get the attention that they deserve. If it's possible to get some voice actors, that would make this movie unstoppable with the said improvements. But this is a great movie all around, I hope it gets a good rating. I voted either 4 or 5, I forget. This really is as much a Tomb Raider story as any of the games.
Cool!
That was neat.
Great job on those effects. I like seeing stuff like that. Anyways, keep up that stuff cuz its really good. Your an awsome artist.
not as intense as the first one..
i must say that you're an excellent artist, but this episode may have been slightly longer than the first in length, but it just didn't have as much action in it, i thought.
still, great artwork, with pretty good animation. and the audio sound effects were also pretty good. overall i'd say you're doing pretty well with this series, and hopefully the next episode will contain all of the action!
7/10
(THE THUMB: UP!!)
great, but not perfect.
I have been waiting a long time for the second ep to show up. Dude, I can see your efforts there. The graphics and the sound are almost perfect. However, let me be a bit strict here. The way how Laura walked run was not successful as she walked (ran) like a robot. In addition, like the first ep, the flash is still a bit too slow. As we all know, Tomb Raider is an action moive, so I really think that you should improve the flaw of being slow. Regardless these small flaws, you did great. Over all 4/5.